08-02-2018, 09:43 AM
Nice job on the final portrait I think its a clear improvement!
Her eye is still too big and more in shadow, and she has more hairline/forehead. That seems to be consistent mistake with all the head drawings here, even the skulls, they all need more forehead and. Its funny its like you placed the skulls you studied in these heads haha.
Also her jaw is longer... come to think of it all the jaws in this last post are too short, I think if you fixed those two things in future head drawings you'd see another very quick improvement ;)
Great work though Peter, youll be in good hands with Erik, he's pretty beast
Her eye is still too big and more in shadow, and she has more hairline/forehead. That seems to be consistent mistake with all the head drawings here, even the skulls, they all need more forehead and. Its funny its like you placed the skulls you studied in these heads haha.
Also her jaw is longer... come to think of it all the jaws in this last post are too short, I think if you fixed those two things in future head drawings you'd see another very quick improvement ;)
Great work though Peter, youll be in good hands with Erik, he's pretty beast
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[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]