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[Fedodika]

Hey artloader:

Kind of a strange pose for the cheetah, but seeing the reference i believe it. I think you should arch his back more and even draw what you dont see, as in make his pose more intense as in the photo. You drew his head too large and his chest, ribs, are slunk lower, his extended paw is larger and both his front legs are longer and thinner.

You did a good job on the rendering, the transitions and shadows are smooth and clean. I think this is a good reference as far as lighting, but the pose is just awkward, theres no good line of action, and im not sure what personality its trying to evoke.

I hope youll keep posting cuz i luv u <3