03-13-2019, 12:43 AM
i wouldnt reccomend senshi stock to practice from, maybe for inspiration, her lighting is not good so its difficult to see forms, plus her body suit conceals a lot of important things about like hip protrusions/ribs etc.
Croquis cafe has very nice still images to practice from, nice lighting, nice physiques, and nice poses not the most dynamic but above average for sure.
Now id reccomend for this stuff in particular you drop the straight lines only thing and let the lines flow more, swing the arm, that rendered one above her hip to her armpit is a perfectly straight line and its very bizarre looking, though your proportions arent too bad.
but yea watch these vids and start thinking about how to flow lines more
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07fusT-dwVE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OWLT0_i5Co
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4ZIDhM9WOA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFP8L4OUL2E
Croquis cafe has very nice still images to practice from, nice lighting, nice physiques, and nice poses not the most dynamic but above average for sure.
Now id reccomend for this stuff in particular you drop the straight lines only thing and let the lines flow more, swing the arm, that rendered one above her hip to her armpit is a perfectly straight line and its very bizarre looking, though your proportions arent too bad.
but yea watch these vids and start thinking about how to flow lines more
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07fusT-dwVE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2OWLT0_i5Co
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h4ZIDhM9WOA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFP8L4OUL2E
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]