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[Fedodika]

your portraits r gettin better, i think you should look out for hard edges around the eyes. ive noticed i can lay in an eye, shade it halfway then just barely scrub it with my finger or a blender digitally and it instantly gives it life from a blurred edge

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...AG0682.png
Or this one the hard edge in the mouth crease, the bottom of the hairline/cheek creese, and eyelashes, faces are full of soft edges.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...AG0681.png

I feel her lips are a little crooked or too large, and the lip crease above (between the nose) you should never ever ever ever indicate that with a hard line. i cant see the reference, but i feel her eye is like sliding off her head a little, or they arent symmetrical. of course, there is some room for that in reality.

But the good news is most the crits i had were on edges which means you aint struggling with proportions and moving into more advanced stuff :)