Coinhero's sketchbook

[darktiste]

From my perspective i would make the outside less bright to let your contrast imply that inviting feeling to go inside.The door frame help frame the character a nice choose.I feel like the weakest part is the flow that need a bit of help i felt like your line from the window were pushing the eye outside the composition so i choose to break them with some vegetation and i also added a bit more of that vegetation to break the repetition of the square shape being to evident.I also like how the vegetation create little negative shape that create interest and create a nice contrast between the outside element and the inside element.Finally i added a few branch on the left to help break that frame of the door and give more flow toward the character.I also added a bit of warm fog coming out from the ''inn'' to create a cold vs warm outside to help create the idea of something cooking inside.

I don't think you made any bad choose honesty i am just giving you an other perspective.