12-16-2019, 07:46 AM
your poster is looking better for sure, still feels stiff but the hand looks better and the face is better too, maybe youll see that with time.
The black guy drawing is not bad, his torso is a tad short but overall the proportions and mapping are rather good.
The yoni is pretty rough, his jaw should be way fuller, you drew him like a 10 year old with a beard; I think the first drawing of the woman looks ghoulish, generally you wanna hold off on aging lines and try to make them smooth as you can, even older women, unless their age is so charming, you wanna dial it back.
The older man figure pose has a lot of proportion issues and skewing but its an honest effort
Do whatever you did on that black guy, thats working
The black guy drawing is not bad, his torso is a tad short but overall the proportions and mapping are rather good.
The yoni is pretty rough, his jaw should be way fuller, you drew him like a 10 year old with a beard; I think the first drawing of the woman looks ghoulish, generally you wanna hold off on aging lines and try to make them smooth as you can, even older women, unless their age is so charming, you wanna dial it back.
The older man figure pose has a lot of proportion issues and skewing but its an honest effort
Do whatever you did on that black guy, thats working
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