01-09-2020, 01:54 AM
Nice process! Especially for your first time with the medium.You really did a good job with grouping and creating appealing shadow shapes!
I recommend you to be a little more careful how you define your shapes though. If you look at the right shoulder(from the viewers perspective) the whole Trapezius/Infraspinatus region is looking a bit wonky.
I don't know if that's accurate to what you looked at, but to me it also looks weird how strong the contrast of the eyelids is. Even if it looked somewhat like that in the photo I would let that part fade into shadow more just to make for a cooler looking picture.
And on the matter of making a cooler looking picture, I would really love to see you use more vibrant colors to make everything pop more.
But really, I suspect your next few tries are probably going to address all this anyways, so looking forward to those!
I recommend you to be a little more careful how you define your shapes though. If you look at the right shoulder(from the viewers perspective) the whole Trapezius/Infraspinatus region is looking a bit wonky.
I don't know if that's accurate to what you looked at, but to me it also looks weird how strong the contrast of the eyelids is. Even if it looked somewhat like that in the photo I would let that part fade into shadow more just to make for a cooler looking picture.
And on the matter of making a cooler looking picture, I would really love to see you use more vibrant colors to make everything pop more.
But really, I suspect your next few tries are probably going to address all this anyways, so looking forward to those!