Peter's Sketchbook

[Peter]

i think you can keep pushing the values on say the eye, like the background on that and lips is much darker and dont be afraid to try and push those brights all the way up to what they are in the photo, just keep laying in white and blending without getting it too caked, or use solvent and a rag to pull out and get those brights up right now they're like a mid tone and could be so much more

Thanks Fedodika. I think I definitely got sloppy towards the end on both of them as I was trying to complete them in a set time limit after work, especailly on the eye , for some reason I struggled alot with that one. I think I need to spend more time on these paintings.