Peter's Sketchbook

[Fedodika]

this http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...02%205.jpg is a big improvement on the female face looking pretty. Her lip is a little noodley at the top, and her hair could use more volume. her lips and jaw are actually fuller, but you did well playing it down to be safe. Her neck is also too short, which will hurt the feminine qualities of a portrait.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...%20193.jpg

tiny winy heads dude

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...%20194.jpg
nice right image, good shape design... still these teeny heads are a bad habit you have, i kinda have it too.

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...g%20.2.jpg

This looks better than the sketch for sure, but it has that noodly lip problem, and her nose is slurring over to the right; id also angle it more, make it less of a tube shape. Her cheekbone feels weird to me, not seeing the ref i imagine that shape is not the right contour, which makes her jaw look very masculine and unnatractive.

big step up on the first portrait peter!