02-07-2020, 06:59 AM
(01-27-2020, 03:38 AM)Fedodika Wrote: this http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...02%205.jpg is a big improvement on the female face looking pretty. Her lip is a little noodley at the top, and her hair could use more volume. her lips and jaw are actually fuller, but you did well playing it down to be safe. Her neck is also too short, which will hurt the feminine qualities of a portrait.Thanks Man, I didn't realise I made so many mistakes on the portrait painting. Not gonna lie... I was struggling with some of the smaller details like the eyes and lips, probably should of worked larger (these are 9x12) to help with that but atleast I know for next time.
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...%20193.jpg
tiny winy heads dude
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...%20194.jpg
nice right image, good shape design... still these teeny heads are a bad habit you have, i kinda have it too.
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...g%20.2.jpg
This looks better than the sketch for sure, but it has that noodly lip problem, and her nose is slurring over to the right; id also angle it more, make it less of a tube shape. Her cheekbone feels weird to me, not seeing the ref i imagine that shape is not the right contour, which makes her jaw look very masculine and unnatractive.
big step up on the first portrait peter!
Yh I can't seem to shake this habit of tiny heads in my quicksketch. Doesn't help that I don't actively work on my quicksketch apart from the 40mins or so a week in my life class. I'm planning on working on my figure drawings come March leading up to te anatomy course I want to take with Scott Eaton that starts end of April and continue wokring on my figure skills along side it, see if I can give myself a good 3 hour block every week for quicksketch and hopefully correct my tiny heads.