Peter's Sketchbook

[Peter]

your pinup master study is looking great! the shapes are really well designed, her face is cute, the shading is wrapping the forms well!

quick crits on these faces:

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...0layin.jpg
You drew a pretty face but the likeness for this woman, her jaw is a lot fuller and bigger

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...in%202.jpg
Again, nice face, her eyebrows are a little higher up and her lips are a little lower

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...in%203.jpg
This ones way off, his forehead should be a lot taller, his jaw is a lot heavier, and his eye is smaller

http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/attachme...in%204.jpg
Jaw should be fuller, and his face has more width and dimension on each side.

These are definitely a step up though, pay attention to jawlines id say!

Thanks manb. I actually notcied quite a few of these mistakes when I was editing them together but I'm glad they are a step up though, I wasn't feeling too confident with them since I feel like by now i shouldn't be having these types of proportional mistakes but I guess all I can do is keep moving forward.

Be prepared for some more bad proportions....