Artloader - Sketchbook

[chubby_cat]

Hey Artloader. Cool comic page study!

A quick pointer would be to study how Ribic uses colour to add a sense of atmosphere and interest. Your study feels a bit washed out with colour compared to the original. This is most obvious in the background gradients - like in the last panel note how intense his yellow/green smoke is compared to your more beige/grey version. With comics you can really pack punches with colour (or lack of) so don't be afraid to experiment and push it (there's always the option to reign it back in later down the line!). Take further notice of the colours and temperatures he uses to get some interesting vibes.

Hope that helps!