12-02-2022, 07:26 AM
Somehow i prefer the first one of the 3 composition it had a more desolated and open feeling to it.But the character was to big i would say and i also like the ravine it added to the inhospital vibe .Now it look more like an abandon portal than a newly discovered one.It just depend where you want the mood to go.
But obviously this is already taking a different dirrection already...
For color choose i would probably go for number two.
The problem with getting feed back is you gotta account that feedback aren't instantious so if you got a professor you should probably be really consulting with them mostly i would suggest you use this sketchbook for your own personal project rather than what might be work where there already someone supervising the progress.
For the composition study i think you should do them even smaller that way you can think more and draw less it very much the essence of that stage of the process i would argue.
But obviously this is already taking a different dirrection already...
For color choose i would probably go for number two.
The problem with getting feed back is you gotta account that feedback aren't instantious so if you got a professor you should probably be really consulting with them mostly i would suggest you use this sketchbook for your own personal project rather than what might be work where there already someone supervising the progress.
For the composition study i think you should do them even smaller that way you can think more and draw less it very much the essence of that stage of the process i would argue.