11-28-2023, 01:50 AM
I personally feel like the archer position is off it not aiming at anything signicant useful.But i see that it that way for the narrative effect.
The archer silhouette is well define against the background which make him the focus right away which is great and it scale also help to establish that visual hierachy.
But i feel like the monster is to far away for that warrior to be diving this way(obviously i know nothing about is super power)you gotta assume people know nothing about the setting like is it a classical fantasy type of setting where human are simple human making heroic feat or is this the type of fantasy where everyone as a spell up is sleeve.Without some kind of visual effect that give us the idea that they have some kind of power up it hard to believe he or she could achieve that feat i am just gonna put it like that.
A bit of history if this an hydra as you might know weapon are pretty much useless against them as they grow more head the more you chop and they have pick the worst time possible to fight one because torch would be render useless by the weather.It just to let you know that the more you learn the better your story are because you can extract information to infuse your story.
For example if you knew that you would have change the weather and equip them with some kind of fire source.
The problem with setting certain parameter in a creature such as multiple head is that it can approch what i would call the myth valley which make any creature design that resemble the apparence of a certain creature become blur with the quality of that myth.For example it would be hard to make a one eye creature that also giantic and humanoid not be mistaken as a cyclop.It not to say that creature design should stay as far as possible from the myth valley but that i think good design ride at the edge of that valley it familiar enough and borrow from myth with a twist.
The archer silhouette is well define against the background which make him the focus right away which is great and it scale also help to establish that visual hierachy.
But i feel like the monster is to far away for that warrior to be diving this way(obviously i know nothing about is super power)you gotta assume people know nothing about the setting like is it a classical fantasy type of setting where human are simple human making heroic feat or is this the type of fantasy where everyone as a spell up is sleeve.Without some kind of visual effect that give us the idea that they have some kind of power up it hard to believe he or she could achieve that feat i am just gonna put it like that.
A bit of history if this an hydra as you might know weapon are pretty much useless against them as they grow more head the more you chop and they have pick the worst time possible to fight one because torch would be render useless by the weather.It just to let you know that the more you learn the better your story are because you can extract information to infuse your story.
For example if you knew that you would have change the weather and equip them with some kind of fire source.
The problem with setting certain parameter in a creature such as multiple head is that it can approch what i would call the myth valley which make any creature design that resemble the apparence of a certain creature become blur with the quality of that myth.For example it would be hard to make a one eye creature that also giantic and humanoid not be mistaken as a cyclop.It not to say that creature design should stay as far as possible from the myth valley but that i think good design ride at the edge of that valley it familiar enough and borrow from myth with a twist.