Artloader - Sketchbook

[Noone]

Heya, welcome back again and nice work on the render, I dig the soft pastels and lighting. I noticed an issue that ocurred in the initial figure sketch: the leg coming forward had been bent somewhat unnaturally inwards at the ankle, making the underlying skeletal structure feel "rubbery".


Always good to remember that while there is an inward angle from hip to knee for the femur, the tibia is essentially straight from the knee to ankle, and should help you place these correctly. The front leg is probably a tad too long as well.

The boots helped ameliorate this in the final render but it still seems off to me at the ankle. I also think her feet are too small.
I also agree the vertical text is very hard to read, I would consider redesigning your UI to retain the feel with alien symbols if vertical, but anything english, make sure it is horizontal or very easy to read, especially for a concept presentation.