08-27-2013, 04:30 PM
Heya! since the theme is free this week i think i might focus on clouds.
not sure if ill get to do a piece by the end. but studies are something!
patrik! yeah man. looking good.
i oughta try juggling two pieces at the same time. might be interesting.
yours is looking pretty nice.
i feel pretty confotable with how the deer blends and separates from the tree. idk if im quite achieving it. but i was thinking of the windmill concept from gurney.
looking at it again. it IS blending in a little too much. damn.
thanks.
to critique you.....
i think you could put some more though on the "framing" of the focal point. so you can give it more contrast..
just think of what the value of whats around it(visually, not phisically) because on both of them. the focal point is bright. but whats around them is also bright!. a easy solution that you could have applyed to the second one would be to darken the rocks around the turtles head. maybe its pushing a bit of what it would look like in real life. but it would do wonderful things to the composition!
and talking like that is straight up hipocrit of me, beause i really didnt do that good job on framing the focal point. as you called it on me. ughf. we must keep battling!
not sure if ill get to do a piece by the end. but studies are something!
patrik! yeah man. looking good.
i oughta try juggling two pieces at the same time. might be interesting.
yours is looking pretty nice.
i feel pretty confotable with how the deer blends and separates from the tree. idk if im quite achieving it. but i was thinking of the windmill concept from gurney.
looking at it again. it IS blending in a little too much. damn.
thanks.
to critique you.....
i think you could put some more though on the "framing" of the focal point. so you can give it more contrast..
just think of what the value of whats around it(visually, not phisically) because on both of them. the focal point is bright. but whats around them is also bright!. a easy solution that you could have applyed to the second one would be to darken the rocks around the turtles head. maybe its pushing a bit of what it would look like in real life. but it would do wonderful things to the composition!
and talking like that is straight up hipocrit of me, beause i really didnt do that good job on framing the focal point. as you called it on me. ughf. we must keep battling!