06-14-2014, 08:54 PM
You guys are unbelievably awesome! I never expected so many paintovers and I honestly appreciate it. I apologize for not properly thanking all of you earlier.
All of you were right about the bridge splitting the image with nothing really going on in the lower half. I also like Valeriens idea of adding more storytelling elements. Also thanks to Defre for pointing out how light works and to Haze, mneat and monkeybread for overworking the focus and composition.
I have been trying to work on what was suggested, basically taking monkeybreads paintover as a foundation. I added details and started working in warm and cool colors.
I know that I'm slow, but I'd like to take this piece as close to a finished, portfolio level as I can and I would greatly appreciate further comments!
All of you were right about the bridge splitting the image with nothing really going on in the lower half. I also like Valeriens idea of adding more storytelling elements. Also thanks to Defre for pointing out how light works and to Haze, mneat and monkeybread for overworking the focus and composition.
I have been trying to work on what was suggested, basically taking monkeybreads paintover as a foundation. I added details and started working in warm and cool colors.
I know that I'm slow, but I'd like to take this piece as close to a finished, portfolio level as I can and I would greatly appreciate further comments!