07-24-2015, 07:37 AM
Hey, man!
Color palette looks good, I think the biggest critique I have is the gesture/pose. Nobody really stands like that. Her arms are going off straight to her sides, her legs are far apart and it kinda looks like her hips are awkwardly tilted.
I did a paintover and gave her a more natural/serene pose to match her face. I also added more form to her torso to and slimed down that hair stuff. It's at that point where the size became comical so a little slimmer makes it look natural.
Color palette looks good, I think the biggest critique I have is the gesture/pose. Nobody really stands like that. Her arms are going off straight to her sides, her legs are far apart and it kinda looks like her hips are awkwardly tilted.
I did a paintover and gave her a more natural/serene pose to match her face. I also added more form to her torso to and slimed down that hair stuff. It's at that point where the size became comical so a little slimmer makes it look natural.
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