Danger Zone

[clockodile]

Cool sketches of the bear and the elf archer! The pose and expression on the archer is so good, visually interesting, and it just has that 'before the event' tension to it, like she is about to snipe someone from on top of a bank or something. Her outfit design is fantastic too, loving the little details and the shape style. The bear-wolf is looking way better too. Pushing that hump makes it look much more powerful and beast-like.

I see what you mean about the perspective - though graveyards get some leeway because they're meant to be wonky, especially the really old ones. What seems to throw it is the sarcophagus in the foreground, since it is sort of over-leaning without a ground plane. (The angle also kind of leads the eye off the page.) I like what you are doing with the light scheme, the energy bolt looks very dramatic and cool - it may help to tone the green down a bit on the grass though, to really give the light effect visual dominance. (A red (or reddish) light would be heavily absorbed by a green surface anyhow.) The background is interesting way to showcase her though, so I hope you keep it.