10-09-2018, 08:30 AM
while the face is aimed in the right direction proportion wise, the style is not appealing, like the long lips and the squinty eyes are not attractive. remember the bicep on both the inside and outside go from a large to a narrow shape, look at people flexing those well developed muscles and youll see it. Your forearm shape on (his) right arm is good, the other, again close but make sure you feel those forms out as straights and curves.
The poses is stiff, the abdominals are going up all the way to the bottom of the pec which is odd, ive never seen that before. Im not sure why the form line on the bottom abdonimal muscle goes into the form instead of wrapping on top of it. Also (his) left deltoid has some strange shapes, like its floating on top of the bicep instead of attatching to it. Youre closer on (his) right deltoid, but the left one feels like symbol drawing, and i know deltoids are confusing as hell :)
The poses is stiff, the abdominals are going up all the way to the bottom of the pec which is odd, ive never seen that before. Im not sure why the form line on the bottom abdonimal muscle goes into the form instead of wrapping on top of it. Also (his) left deltoid has some strange shapes, like its floating on top of the bicep instead of attatching to it. Youre closer on (his) right deltoid, but the left one feels like symbol drawing, and i know deltoids are confusing as hell :)
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