03-20-2019, 09:58 AM
im not saying dont ever use the straight line thing, but dont limit yourself to it right now try curved lines and really lock it down in your skill, ill do this quick drawover... Look at walents stuff too, you know mix it up. Yes ive seen those links many times, i even show them to newer artists, its good to know about this technique, but not be dogmatic about it, especially for doing dynamic poses where rythm is everything
You seriously miss the line of action purely due to the forced straight line here, you could even exaggerate it a bit. Use curved lines to rough it in, get as much energy as you can, then you simplify into straight lines. Your legs have a nice flow, but a lot of your lines are really heavy, vary their weight more, also senshii, bless her heart, but shes not attractive, shes pudgy, average face... if you do practice from her, pretty her up... alot!
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Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
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