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Hi, first of all, you've got some nice sketches. The the values of light and dark are correct. I recommend you to start with the basics - anatomy, perspective, composition and color theory, but keep drawing from imagination and notice that your drawings will become even better as you advance in learning the basics.
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Two pages? madness.
Now shoot for 20.
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Nice perspective, your character construction isn't shabby either, welcome to the forums :)
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Holy crap that sounds intense!!! Looking forward to seeing your progress, best of luck in your atelier!
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Really digging the use of boxes, I like them too. Take some more looks into loomis and bridgman. i always tend to do some hardcore loomis stuff first, then applying it from imgination, then looking at bridgmans boxes, then doing those from imgination, then bridgmans muscles, then combining Everything I've learnt together. Try to doodle a lot in free time, perhaps on your way to school. It'd be cool if your lines would me more confident: less chicken scrating, also in your rendering. But, I must say, it's improving bit by bit as I look at your sb.
Also, super awesome that you're going to an atelier, I'm jelly, and too poor to attend one :p
Something that was tought me in the 6 life drawing lessons I ever had: look, look closely and compare. Stretch your arm out with your pencil too look how far or close everythi with each other. For example: hold your pencil vertically on top of the hand. Is it above the foot? The knee? Is this correct in your drawing?
Don't be afraid to erase what you've done before to correct a mistake that you noticed, even when it means deleting half of your drawing :p you'll learn from it, and probably get a better drawing!
Either way, just some of my thoughts, and I'm looking forward to the atelier stuff (:
Cheers!
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The still lifes improve right before your eyes as you scroll down :O
cool stuff, seems like you're learning a lot.