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Oh, that bird study is *beautiful*!!! And *so much* improvement in your values, congratulations! :)
If I had to criticise something about it, it would be that it still appears to be floating a bit, maybe the shadow should be noticeably darker right at its feet. But the bird itself = perfect. And I like its smug expression *g*
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Yeah, I know :) And as far as values are concerned, you definitely nailed it. If you have trouble judging the values while working on a colour piece, I find that it helps to keep one layer on top filled with black and set to saturation (assuming you work in Photoshop). That way, you can quickly switch it on and off to check if it works without the colour information, or if you have to enhance the contrast somewhere for the forms to read well.
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Ironically enough... I'm actually doing that right now. I wasn't sure if that was the correct thing to do or not... but it seemed better than "desaturated" and "undo". lol... So thank you for that. I'm glad you think I nailed it on the last piece I did. I'm offering free commissions on dA at the moment and my friend Gee has asked I do a digital painting of one of her bird photo's so I'm working on a coloured bird :) which is actually my favorite of all her photographs amusingly enough!! But thank you for your advice :)
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Well done! that is a great step up and application of what you've learnt, I can already see the improvement with this bird compared to your first post. Looking forward to seeing more, keep it up! :).
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Thank you Jon, and for teaching me. In truth I don't think I understood exactly what people meant before. I'm currently trying to apply what I've learnt to colour doing another bird and mark making. But based on values. I hope this piece holds up to the last. I've been working just over an hour and most of that was trying to work out if I'm doing the values right with colour. But thank you for what you said.. and again for the tutorial :) :) You've been a massive massive help!!
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>Bump<
Any thoughts on the background?? I thought sleeping on it would help... apparently not. A few people over on dA have said they like the background but I'm still rather indecisive atm.
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I like it. See what it looks like with the really white hotspot in the background darkened a bit, it seems to be drawing a lot of my attention past the bird, but I might be wrong - just a suggestion.
Great work
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there are already some improvement on the last bird studie. just keep trying!
and welcome to the daggers forum ;D
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Hello dear, I am so happy to see that you found your place around CD already.
Welcome,and I hope you will enjoy your stay. Learn from others,and make others learn from you.
Bird study was incredible, you did a good job with background because its not what you are studying-its the bird. Good job I'm so proud of you : )
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To Nimao,
Thank you very much and hello :) I've been overwhelmed with help here and hope to one day give back to this wonderful community :)
To Toxicpanda
Hello hun!! Yes I was very confused and posted in the shout box about my confusion and darktiste was very quick in helping me find my way around and getting set up. I've conversed with a few artists now who have all be so nice and so helpful. JonHop actually did a video for me which was a massive help as I now actually understand what people are talking about and I hope to built upon that. I'm so proud of me too, but none of it would have happened if you hadn't shown me support and given me the links... I've been reading a lot round here, practicing, watching youtube and livestream and reading my books along side those on dropbox. Sounds a bit hectic but I'm having a blast and it's been such a wonderful start to what I hope will be a brilliant journey. But seriously thank you!!
Imogen xX
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Love the bird study! The colors are just perfect!
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Hey Tygerson
Thank you I'm glad you like it. I did two birds but I assume you're talking about the Lilac Breasted Roller (as it's in colour) lol... Thank you for you comment hun and taking the time to look :D
Imogen