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Hey there, I see some sweet stuff in here! That Daryl turned out very nicely, showing a lot of improvement already :)
I feel that your digital pieces could profit from more use of bigger brushes. Maybe try to block in the general shapes with as few, large strokes as possible and save the finer brushes for important details. And keep rockin'!
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cool stuff, i see improvement in this page alone. for criticism, in the gnome piece you can add white to the cool green light and yellows to the warm light. keep on doing your thing :)
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Love your ink and pencil sketches. They look like pocket sketchbook size. Anyway just love 'em!
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Hey, really cool stuff, i particularly like those last portraits. One thing i'd recommend you is to use less black in your illustrations, seems to me you use it to fill a lot of space and as shadows, try some other color, maybe use some atmospheric perspective, it think that'd help, especially in those last environments. Anyway, great job, keep that up.
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a lot of broken image that can't be seen is it just me?
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I think it better to start a other one because it can discourage people to continue staying on this post if they see broken image even more because there a lot of them at the very beggining but you might need to state in here that you switch to a new post so people who have subscribe to you can switch to the new one
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Perfection is unmeasurable therefor it impossible to reach it.