Seeking critique - Portrait

[cicakkia]

Hello, daggers. I was trying redesign from anime face character into something realistic approach. So I need to seek some critique and advice about how's the face I did so far. Any paintover is much appreciated. Thank you very much


Captain Okita Redesign




The original version

[darktiste]

the nose could be bit more redish with more texture since it sit in front of the viewer
the beard look more like fur then hair for the moment also the jacket should absorb more light then it actually is but i can't really tell because i dont know the fabric you wanna represent so i am not sure for that.

[cicakkia]

@darktiste
Thank you darktiste for the feedback. I see. I will put some red and texture of the nose area then. And also repaint the beard. Gee, I think I paint too much fur lately. anyway Thanks for the photo. It really comes handy :)