Personal Project

[marqueeadam]

hello guys, this is s personal project that I workin on
heavy inspired by Ghost In The Shell and Gantz, and lot of Rapoza's stuff too
this is my first time drawing robotic things, and I know there's mistake here, so I need your critique guys

thanks :D

[xpbonus]

hey nice work just the lighting on her butt but yeah its quite good overall.[img][/img]

[Matt C]

Be careful with her gun-hand, I'd really get some good reference for the fingers, which are sort of stumpy right now. Her other arm might be a tad long, or it feels like it warps once it turns translucent.
Its looking quite cool though, keep up the work!

[marqueeadam]

hey nice work just the lighting on her butt but yeah its quite good overall.[img][/img]

thanks man, I really need critiques for lightning since I'm so bad at it, thanks again :D

Be careful with her gun-hand, I'd really get some good reference for the fingers, which are sort of stumpy right now. Her other arm might be a tad long, or it feels like it warps once it turns translucent.
Its looking quite cool though, keep up the work!

yes, I know it's bad but I lack of reference of hand with gun, I searched on Deviantart but no one fit for my drawing so I draw it just using reflection of my hand in the mirror, thanks for the correction :D