02-10-2016, 08:05 AM
Heya purple. Got a quick and sloppy oh-god-I-don't-have-time redline for ya.
All that was changed was the size of the glasses and the angle of the lips. Flipping the canvas makes you notice those mistakes a lot easier. When you're in doubt, simplify the masses and check if they align with your chosen perspective. The nose also looks a bit off; it should be facing the camera a bit more.
Aside from that, your proportions are looking good, but slightly off sometimes.
Keep it up!
All that was changed was the size of the glasses and the angle of the lips. Flipping the canvas makes you notice those mistakes a lot easier. When you're in doubt, simplify the masses and check if they align with your chosen perspective. The nose also looks a bit off; it should be facing the camera a bit more.
Aside from that, your proportions are looking good, but slightly off sometimes.
Keep it up!