02-10-2016, 08:05 AM
Heya purple. Got a quick and sloppy oh-god-I-don't-have-time redline for ya.
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All that was changed was the size of the glasses and the angle of the lips. Flipping the canvas makes you notice those mistakes a lot easier. When you're in doubt, simplify the masses and check if they align with your chosen perspective. The nose also looks a bit off; it should be facing the camera a bit more.
Aside from that, your proportions are looking good, but slightly off sometimes.
Keep it up!
![Filename: ayylmaoredline.jpg
Size: 481.9 KB02-10-2016, 07:55 AM](attachments/80391/ayylmaoredline.jpg)
All that was changed was the size of the glasses and the angle of the lips. Flipping the canvas makes you notice those mistakes a lot easier. When you're in doubt, simplify the masses and check if they align with your chosen perspective. The nose also looks a bit off; it should be facing the camera a bit more.
Aside from that, your proportions are looking good, but slightly off sometimes.
Keep it up!