10-31-2015, 02:46 AM
Lurch Thanks so much for the paintover, I like what you did on the tree. I realised as well that there is a line going from the squirrels head down the branch. I could delete the branch, and turn him a bit so he's looking more at us but realised I've been approaching it like a single illustration, where the movement to the right is actually what I should want since it will lead to the next panel! Gonna redo it and make it cleaner but in the end will not change much. Thanks again for the suggestions! I like your second pumpkin, the perspective on the eyes is nice and dramatic : )
Finished my final panel for this comic, figured I'd post them all up in sequence. I have a feeling it doesn't make sense... let me know if the story / situation is clear... next time I do a comic I will plan how the panels fit on the page too since I got some less than ideal stuff going on here.
There is bigger resolution version here: http://imgur.com/239lH5B
Last day tomorrow! For me I will just fix up that panel 5. Kind of an anti climax to the month but I am worn out after finishing this comic!
Finished my final panel for this comic, figured I'd post them all up in sequence. I have a feeling it doesn't make sense... let me know if the story / situation is clear... next time I do a comic I will plan how the panels fit on the page too since I got some less than ideal stuff going on here.
There is bigger resolution version here: http://imgur.com/239lH5B
Last day tomorrow! For me I will just fix up that panel 5. Kind of an anti climax to the month but I am worn out after finishing this comic!