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Looking crisp my luv, Watch the neck placement, it seems like you're missing those back muscles i mentioned earlier! The head is too far forward and the ear would have no way to connect to the sternomastecloid. Good headphones!!

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Matthew From a mirror cause its harder that way and I can play around with lighting more. The ones without the glasses are from a photo cause i wanted to actually see my eyes :/ the struggles of wearing glasses haha

Fedo Yeah man I had bog problems with this one traditional was really hard for me. I am so used to adjusting in photoshop. Stupid shortcuts and thank you for pointing this things out <3

Todays selfie with hoodie >.<


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good simplification, i think the shoulders are too high up, and the way the right side of the hood kinda tangents with the canvas makes it feel cramped. Remember the neck has a really low and graceful rythm, it's tough to master, keep postin!!

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Now that you are saying it i see how wrong it is >.< thank you fpr helping me see although i i should be able to do that damn 

So today i did no drawing and just painted directly. Just felt like it. Oh and my first day of uni was today...pretty fun :D


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Next one :D need to work harder and im sick of my face haha


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You're getting to know your face "like the back of your hand," as they say. Nice work painting those from life!

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This one is so horrible i was thinking of not posting it but that would be stupid. Im here to improve after all! Oh and thank you man <3


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the problem here is symmetry; and that's why the riley method is helpful because it helps you see those invisible grids to align the features. But dont let me preach :)

Always remember that lips end will align with the center of the eye, and watch that neck! The skew is a curse, take it from me!!

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Fedo yeah idk what i was doing there. I think i just did this one just to do it with no thought behind it :/

Today i tried out some different colors. I wanna do something with each one from now on and focus on a certain thing while doing it and not just numbly copying my face


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you seem like a tired old gal ;)

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Haha always fedo :*

Man i completely forgot to post the last two sorry >.<


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very snooty in the first one!

WATCH THE neCK SIZEEeeee

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Snooty? What does this mean? I knowww I need to study more >.<


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Juict strokes my luvvvvv <3 XX

SYMMETRY!!

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