layla michelle's sketchbook
#1
howdy yall and hello to everyone not in the west. 

i must admit i'm a bit scared to post my art around here, but it's not like it's gonna kill me. ^^

i'm going to be entering art school for a BFA Illustration in a few months. i thought it would be kinda silly to share and compare my art throughout the year? 

i'll do my best to share my art, but sometimes my nerves get the best of me. thank you for being patient with me, i'll try my mighty hardest to improve. right now i'm as lost as an easter's egg with where i want to take my art, but i think i will get there. 

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here's a drawing i made the other day of two funky looking chao. i'm trying my hardest to draw a lot, but right now i'm as poor as a church mouse so i don't have too much time LOL. but thank yall. byebye for now ^^
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#2
Welcome

What strike my attention first is the way you do the outline it not flowing gracefully and it inconsistent.If you want to change the thickness of the outine you should use a brush that thin out at the end.About color i feel like the color are confusing they don't help define the volume of the form in my opinion.

I tried to show you what i meant.Minus the part about color.


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(05-17-2019, 01:33 PM)darktiste Wrote: Welcome

What strike my attention first is the way you do the outline it not flowing gracefully and it inconsistent.If you want to change the thickness of the outine you should use a brush that thin out at the end.About color i feel like the color are confusing they don't help define the volume of the form in my opinion.

I tried to show you what i meant.Minus the part about color.

howdy!

thanks for taking the time to help me. i like the outline you've showed me, it looks crisp. the reason the lines are inconsistent is because i paint over a sketch and use the sketch as the lines... LOL. i like the look of them, but i will try to make a cleaner outline next time i think, because the outline you've made looks quite nice.

as for the colors... yeah, they are confusing, aren't they? i've never really been good with values and bright colors (even though i enjoy using them), so i will try my best to get better with them to put some form into it.

thank you very much!
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#4
so friggin' cute. please post more.

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