Stuck on this art I'm making

[Atceterra]

I'm new to digital painting so I'm not really sure how I should improve this art I made. If you guys could help paintover this, that'd be nice. I'm just really stuck on how I should do this piece 

[xelfereht]

Had a little go at how it might be pushed further,
thought it would be more helpful to talk through the process.
I might make the video public instead of unlisted on my youtube if you don't mind, please let me know if its alright with you, and yeah, hope the paint-over helps.

[Atceterra]

Damn, didn't expect that you'd do a video process. I really appreciate the effort man. Yeah, I'm totally ok with it being public. I'll try to go through it when I got the time. Gosh thanks so much man