07-17-2025, 05:14 AM
Hi! Welcome to the forums! :D
For the piece, it's quite hard to read what is what. The lines are a bit messy and I think you could work on making sure each silhouette or element of the drawing reads better. I can sort of see and understand that his hand is on her back, and that he's reaching out for the bottle but the forshortening is quite unclear so thats' where I would put focus on.
It's a nice sketch, but that's where I would develop it further. Her head also seems quite large or maybe it's the hair that makes it feel that way. If she has a lot of volume to the hair, I would make the crown a lot smaller so it doesn't look like her head is quite so big.
Keep us posted! :D
For the piece, it's quite hard to read what is what. The lines are a bit messy and I think you could work on making sure each silhouette or element of the drawing reads better. I can sort of see and understand that his hand is on her back, and that he's reaching out for the bottle but the forshortening is quite unclear so thats' where I would put focus on.
It's a nice sketch, but that's where I would develop it further. Her head also seems quite large or maybe it's the hair that makes it feel that way. If she has a lot of volume to the hair, I would make the crown a lot smaller so it doesn't look like her head is quite so big.
Keep us posted! :D
