Nada CC 2 WIP

[Amit Dutta]

The first comp is much better. You are popping things to the edges and corners quite a bit and leaving the center feel a bit empty, even though I know it won't be in the final. Perhaps, shift the creature a little bit to the right so there is a small overlap with the moon, and you might want to play with flipping the creature to face the other way, into the canvas rather than out of it. I agree with eyliana that overall scale of shapes is very important to keep comps dynamic, so having things too similar in size can affect things. It helps to think in general terms of using areas of large, medium and small in absolutely anything, from the overall comp, to the design details within things. Large, medium, small, shapes all mixed makes things more interesting.

Beautiful mood sketches, I'm so excited to see you finish this one. That creature is just so great and fits the theme perfectly. I think it will be awesome!