Comic thesis crits, please?
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Thanks, Admbrns! Yeah, that panel's been kind of bugging me, I just haven't gotten around to taking new reference and fixing it. I definitely will, though!

Here's my current page 3.

[Image: page3wip_zpsodcze0xl.jpg]

Not quite sure how I feel about the panels here. Should I add another one between panels 5 and 6 showing her kicking off the ground? I'm not quite sure how to show that, and I'm worried that the current panels are a little hard to read.

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Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 12-30-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 12-30-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 12-31-2016, 08:20 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-02-2017, 02:33 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by RottenPocket - 01-04-2017, 09:02 PM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-06-2017, 12:42 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by meat - 01-06-2017, 01:21 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 01-12-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 01-13-2017, 11:38 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:32 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 01-19-2017, 08:40 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 03-03-2017, 09:31 AM

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