Comic thesis crits, please?
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Hey, everyone! It's been a long month since I've posted! I've been plugging along, working long hours on classes and thesis and everything in between. Spring break is in two weeks and my goal is to have the first two comics and paintings completed. I still have some lining for the first one, a few minor details in the painting, a few panels left to sketch in the second comic plus the lines, and finally the second painting to do. Fingers crossed I get it done, but it'll be a lot of work!

Here's the sketches I have so far for the second comic.

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I plan on adding a hand to the second-to-last panel.

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That blank panel is the witch reaching across the table to grab the cup.

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At the bottom, I'm going to add them hugging and then the girl wiping away her tears while thanking the witch.

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And finally, I'm thinking the panel on the left is the witch's hand, the next one is them holding hands, and finally them embracing and kissing.

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Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 12-30-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 12-30-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 12-31-2016, 08:20 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-02-2017, 02:33 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by RottenPocket - 01-04-2017, 09:02 PM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by John - 01-06-2017, 12:42 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by meat - 01-06-2017, 01:21 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Admbrns - 01-12-2017, 09:49 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:32 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Alopex - 01-14-2017, 08:48 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 01-19-2017, 08:40 AM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by ZombieChinchilla - 02-28-2017, 03:21 PM
RE: Comic thesis crits, please? - by Artloader - 03-03-2017, 09:31 AM

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