10-17-2018, 10:37 AM
I would say be careful with the desaturation in the shadow i am not an expert myself but i think you over did it.One other point i want to mention is reflectivity you separate a lot of value as if they where highly reflective material you should reserve highlight for the nose and the forehead and bridge of the face.I use the smudge tool and a soft brush and work where i find your value to be to separated and i blend them into one shape.There a phase where you have to stop mapping value and start blending but you don't seem to go fully into this stage yet.Good luck i hope it was instructive.