Seeking critique
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(03-18-2014, 07:17 PM)Kaffer Wrote: It's coming along nicely, I suggest tuning the chest-light down, it kinda draws attention from the bird (if that is our focus). I'd probably try to bring the values and colors of the bird a bit closer to the robot, I get it needs to stand out but maybe it's a bit too much. There are some pretty interesting textures going on there.. :)
Thanks, Kaffer. That's pretty good suggestion. I will try to reduce the light on its chest

So here it is. Add some debris and wreckage. I also change the bird position, size and color into red. But after the morning, I did see the previous image with blue fat fluffy more interesting than new one. Lol. But I leave you guys opinion.


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Seeking critique - by cicakkia - 03-17-2014, 02:29 PM
RE: Seeking critique - by DimikA - 03-17-2014, 09:25 PM
RE: Seeking critique - by cicakkia - 03-18-2014, 02:59 PM
RE: Seeking critique - by Kaffer - 03-18-2014, 07:17 PM
RE: Seeking critique - by cicakkia - 03-20-2014, 12:30 PM

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