12-04-2017, 05:42 PM
On the piece you doing i got a problem with the size of it there a lot of inactive zone i don't think it necessary to see so much of the celling.Also i find it unclear what going on in the scene.Just remember to do a few thumbnail as it can improve you composition skill.Try to focus on the mood with color in mind too.Don't be afraid to use as much as possible the principle of design to help push the image.Also i would exaggerate the pose of the character and make sure that they contrast from one and an other.Remember to do greyscale version to see if it would work in color first.The leg of the man also are out of proportion if you would be sitting on the edge of the bed.
Hope this little critic was of any help
Hope this little critic was of any help
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Teamwork make your dream work.
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