03-11-2018, 07:36 PM
hey man,
Some quick crits for the hair:
Value across the form: the hair overall looks a little flat and you don't really get the roundness of the head coming through. Might help to do a quick basic underpainting to nail the larger value transition across the form before building up the sections of hair and then the individual strands.
Edges: The hair line and outer edge of the hair should be much softer if your going for something more realistic. Same with the eyebrows too. just softening these parts and and layering some soft individual stands could make quite a big difference.
design: The shapes and flow of the larger sections of get lost among the individual stands you've added (and among some of the harsher value transitions), which is creating that more random messy look. designing the larger shapes/sections of hair (or more accurately copying them) and making sure the smaller stands of hair follow their shape and flow could really clean things up. than the fly away/ random stand can alway be added later
Hope that helps
Some quick crits for the hair:
Value across the form: the hair overall looks a little flat and you don't really get the roundness of the head coming through. Might help to do a quick basic underpainting to nail the larger value transition across the form before building up the sections of hair and then the individual strands.
Edges: The hair line and outer edge of the hair should be much softer if your going for something more realistic. Same with the eyebrows too. just softening these parts and and layering some soft individual stands could make quite a big difference.
design: The shapes and flow of the larger sections of get lost among the individual stands you've added (and among some of the harsher value transitions), which is creating that more random messy look. designing the larger shapes/sections of hair (or more accurately copying them) and making sure the smaller stands of hair follow their shape and flow could really clean things up. than the fly away/ random stand can alway be added later
Hope that helps