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Cool man let's see this finished up...watch the perspective on the jaw and forms on the horns; They are a bit off at the moment, don't start rendering till you fix that :) Sketchathon today or not? Working on mine too...guess I'll put up a wip here :)
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Good job so far gdsworld! You seem to be doing what you have to be doing, but I'd recommend tons more photo studies, tons more poses and a lot of imagination work.Good luck! :)
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Hey GD great stuff, keep it up! Studying masters is great...I really need to do more myself. I feel you've missed the point a little bit with your approach though. You've focused more on looking at the elements of the painting and why they work (which is good) but you just short-changed yourself on the actual painting of it by doing it so quickly and simplistically. This is where I think the most skill and insight would have been gained. Sometimes it pays more to take the time to study the good things...it's not just about output rate, it's about quality learning and insight. I doubt that painting gained you much actual additional painting skill. Just being honest, sorry if it's a bit blunt. :)
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Haha, actually I'm pretty in love with your ellipses, especially the ones in perspective! And I really don't know how you can do them so clean on the computer :) Your heads are looking better, but I think you still need to work a bit on their proportions, the first one looks a bit like he's chewing on something ;) But still cool improvement!
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@foxflake- Thanks man, yeah, proportions need some work.
In the middle of moving to a new studio space so i'll be back into motion soon. Nim, Heaven and Bee, the race is still on. Just need to sort out my space....
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Now that you're set up there is no excuse :p. For your eyes I think you need to practice drawing them aand thinking about them as 3d objects. The eye ball is just that, a ball. The lids are like a rubber sheathing that stretch and wrap around the ball. This will help you get a more realistic look. In your portraits this is a thing that is quite noticeable the eyes are incredibly important to nail. The Penny ones are better, but still could do with a bit of form. I really dig what you've done with the cool tone on her....play with that theme more! It might become something really cool stylistically if developed?