05-11-2017, 10:55 PM
thank you for stopping by our little newbtown alex ;)
Hmm your work strikes me as quite great as I browse through it, so I'm going to take a fine toothed comb to see if there's anything you could improve...
Hmm, the front horse in this hind legs don't feel quite anatomically correct, like he's missing a big chunk of thigh, and the horse in the furthest back seems like his head is too big
https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1465326813
In this one, the chapels on the left most side seem sloppy and not grounded, not the main ones, but the one that seems like a door or a gatehouse as some of the blocks these shapes are built on seem kind of skewed. the gathouse I'm referring to is kind of like slurring out of the chapel it's built into. Also the ground the figure is standing on, the way it's painted makes it seems like he's floating, since the value rises up near the first stair. Just make sure to check those shapes, I know in more painted looking work they're not perfect, but if you're looking to "improve" it, we can always make things in digital tighter.
https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1493061910
Those are your more finished pieces, not sure if I should crit the faster ones, but it would mainly just be anatomy and stuff, so keep postin!
Hmm your work strikes me as quite great as I browse through it, so I'm going to take a fine toothed comb to see if there's anything you could improve...
Hmm, the front horse in this hind legs don't feel quite anatomically correct, like he's missing a big chunk of thigh, and the horse in the furthest back seems like his head is too big
https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1465326813
In this one, the chapels on the left most side seem sloppy and not grounded, not the main ones, but the one that seems like a door or a gatehouse as some of the blocks these shapes are built on seem kind of skewed. the gathouse I'm referring to is kind of like slurring out of the chapel it's built into. Also the ground the figure is standing on, the way it's painted makes it seems like he's floating, since the value rises up near the first stair. Just make sure to check those shapes, I know in more painted looking work they're not perfect, but if you're looking to "improve" it, we can always make things in digital tighter.
https://cdnb.artstation.com/p/assets/ima...1493061910
Those are your more finished pieces, not sure if I should crit the faster ones, but it would mainly just be anatomy and stuff, so keep postin!
70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
