Double Team - Fake Card Illustration
#1
[Image: doubleteam_by_psychotime-d6di6ol.jpg]

Ok, first critique thread at Crimson!

Last year I told myself I’d make a wannabe card illustration of a few of my dumb characters, and this is the result of that. Attempted to fit a specific image size and all that.

[Image: tumblr_mpy924Rag41s6dh1ho1_r2_1280.jpg]

[Image: tumblr_mpy924Rag41s6dh1ho2_r1_1280.jpg]

Hiya! Hiya! Hiya!

Sketchbook | Deviantart | Tumblr
Reply
#2
Characters and background is so sweet, great job with it. The only thing is this object at the center. I totally don't understand what is it. Is it trash can? or an armchair with villain hidden in shadows
[Image: tumblr_mdgj6gIfgq1rawb5do1_400.jpg]
I dunno I can see it with my imagination. It's probably because the characters eyes are directed to center and I can't accept they are looking on boring trashcan. It have to be something more!! xD

Reply
#3
Sorry, just a trash can. I felt a foreground object that's mostly in silhouette would make a better composition.

Hiya! Hiya! Hiya!

Sketchbook | Deviantart | Tumblr
Reply


Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 4 Guest(s)