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#1
Trying to limit my color palette and experimenting.



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#2
Hey, man! 
Color palette looks good, I think the biggest critique I have is the gesture/pose. Nobody really stands like that. Her arms are going off straight to her sides, her legs are far apart and it kinda looks like her hips are awkwardly tilted. 

I did a paintover and gave her a more natural/serene pose to match her face. I also added more form to her torso to and slimed down that hair stuff. It's at that point where the size became comical so a little slimmer makes it look natural. 



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#3
Thanks for the overpaint, Tristan !  Thumbs_up

Here's something new. Your thoughts ?


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#4
Some paintover or tips of how this piece could be better are welcome. :)



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#5
Did a paintover for ya on my stream! hope it helps :)!

https://www.twitch.tv/russellrjones/v/87049991


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