Critiques are welcome

[ShinOkami]

Trying to limit my color palette and experimenting.

[Tristan Berndt]

Hey, man! 
Color palette looks good, I think the biggest critique I have is the gesture/pose. Nobody really stands like that. Her arms are going off straight to her sides, her legs are far apart and it kinda looks like her hips are awkwardly tilted. 

I did a paintover and gave her a more natural/serene pose to match her face. I also added more form to her torso to and slimed down that hair stuff. It's at that point where the size became comical so a little slimmer makes it look natural. 

[ShinOkami]

Thanks for the overpaint, Tristan ! 

Here's something new. Your thoughts ?

[ShinOkami]

Some paintover or tips of how this piece could be better are welcome. :)

[Jonesoda]

Did a paintover for ya on my stream! hope it helps :)!

https://www.twitch.tv/russellrjones/v/87049991