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#21
I searched that name the artist is from spain.

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#22
If I read the answers you give me but some do not understand them at all, I do studies, here I leave a quick study of a magic illustration


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#23
Use google translate don't hesitate it might not be the best translation but it gonna help you slowly learn vocabulary.Also try to use discord to talk with other artist and slowly learn english.

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#24
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Some studies, practices and illustrations.
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#25
id reccomend you draw some skulls and learn the structure of them from every angle as it seems you dont understand how the cranium works. Draw skulls until you can draw them accurately from every angle from memory and it will greatly benefit your head drawings

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#26
Some of my recent paintings:


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#27
youre not improving

you need to learn anatomy and perspective

and stop painting as much

draw a lot more

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#28
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#29
Your forms are really flat

Try to break down each form into a box, cyllinder, or sphere.

Do the assignments on drawabox.com

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#30
My latest pieces! i've been practicing a lot and this is the result, hope you like it guys :)

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I need to focusing more on backgrounds, lights, blending colors and dinamic poses, soon there will be more illustrations with more quality
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#31
I give you A for effort but i still think you need to refine your edge and your rendering is pretty bad.I wouldn't say your improving since you don't show any study and your result are about the same as before this post.


por favor use el traductor de google o de lo contrario no progresará, le estamos dando consejos (no hablo español, así que no me hable en español)

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#32
your work isnt improving since you arent working on your drawing, and all you seem to do is paint. you'll improve more if you just focus on learning proportions and gesture and stop painting for months or even years until you are good at those things

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3465.html SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits! http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-7879.html
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
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#33
Some studies

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And some paintings

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By the way, i know that you decide to stop painting for a while and just draw, but for me painting is like a relaxation therapy, so i will continue doing both at the same time, draw and paint, since painting helps me a lot and for now it's like a hobby, even if i want to dedicate myself to liveon this, sorry for the bad english, the translator is not very good to say xD
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#34
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Quick things

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and some illustrations
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#35
Aprende a hablar inglés y tendrás una habilidad increíble después de eso, confía en mí.

Por favor responde en ingles gracias

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2 new paintings and 2 revisited versions
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#39
You are off to a good start. Continue to study constructions of the faces and bodies and such, and you will stamp out a lot of your errors in no time.  Thumbs_up I recommend that you take some time each and every day to study from the more well-known art and anatomy books and really try to nail the basics. 

As for your paintings, I recomend that you put some more time into value and color temperature studies, as well as edges. The hair on a lot of your characters could have some more softer edges for example. 

I did some overpaints and adjustments keeping all this in mind to one of your paintings. I also added some notes. Hope it helps:




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#40
Thank you so much for your crit Zorrentos! i love the overpainting, i need to study more

i leave here some of my recent works

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