Posts: 11
Threads: 1
Joined: Feb 2019
Reputation:
1
Good work Coinhero! Great to see you tackling projects. The comic is looking very lively, I love the panel with the tiger coming loose from the carrying stick in partciular.
For the page with the hooded boy making a scene, consider coming back to it when you've not looked at it for a few days. I think that + flipping it to check will probably reveal that the poses are a bit off on that page. Panel 1, leftmost woman, for example, feels less surprised and more 'about to kick this little shit' to me. It's mainly small adjustments, but the lovely lines in your other pages tell me you can probably push that one further.