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I'm liking how you start your sketches. I agree with Alfonso that your vanishing points are definitely a bit too close for some of your images and you should consider spreading them further apart. Looking forward what direction you take this Evangelion sketch.
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Hi Conhero!
The perspective sketch looks good and I wonder what's flying there in the sky. Most likely some awesome mech?
I like the dynamics and colors of your previous piece, tbh I didn't notice the front foot first, now that I did it seems a bit too foreshortened to me even for this extreme angle of view, it also makes a tangent with the building wall and merges completely with the hind leg, I think the front one would be a bit lighter in real life. Hope it makes sence.
Posting daily is quite a challenge especially if you study or work. But consistency is good. All the best luck and perseverence to you :)
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I suggest you get a proper handle on 'correct' looking foreshortening. That hand is tiny and not working at all in perspective! Neither does the figure foreshortening jive with the flatness of the perspective of the landscape. Sloppy in will always = sloppy out. It's good to keep painting on new challenges, but if you don't finish and fix the issues in them before moving on, well you aren't really learning as much as you could.
You are on the way to a nice painterly quality so keep working on that aspect.