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Great practise there, Id personally love to see that sailor moon image finished, it was a cool concept with some very dynamic looking lighting.
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Mmm, I'm digging the hair and colors on the mermaid girl, but something feels flat on het torso. I like the photo study of a face in your first post, because it feels kinda sculpty. But, I miss this on the upper torso of the mermaid. The colors feel right, but there's an error in the form. Her rib cage on the right should be sticking out more, and het hip on the right side can be a bit rounder. Perhaps you could also clean up some rendering a bit, that would make it extra awesome (; take a larger brush and just, how to explain is, less dotty? I'm missing some sharp edges, especially on the hands. Also, the dark area underneath looks very very dark and kinda empty, you probably just did not do that part yet, but you could take a look at that. Oh, almost forgot, het torso seems very long. Like, where that golden ring is, that's probably where her crotch should be. But, it's a mermaid, you could have wanted it like that.
Great practise, love your color usage, and keep arting :D
Cheers!
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Hey Vandal! Thank you! I definately plan on finishing sailor uranus one day, I just need to practice a bit first ^^;
Hey Budgie! Thank you very much for the feedback! Really appreciate you taking time for it. I absolutely agree on the anatomical issues! I think it's an issue with me not understanding the masses of a body and the forms in 3D, so I've spent yesterday doing some loomis practices. Boy do I suck at them, but i know now what my issue with the body was. Ta fir pointing that out! Ill try to keep all your suggestions in my head for the next works <3
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Good balance of studies and personal work.
Can't wait to see more!
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I'm really digging your head studies especially the one from yesterday - the colours are great. Only one thing - I think the mouth is a little bit too high and the nostril should be bigger. Otherwise really nice studies[/code].
Also to answer your question - I think the right way to go is to do studies and personal stuff (with reference) at the same time (something that I'm failing to do but will start to very soon).
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Mermaid looks awesome :)
Keep it up man.
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I really like a lot of the choices you make with your lighting. Sometimes its better then the lighting in your reference.
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Great sketchbook, its looking really cool.
That last 3 hour piece you did is really nice, i like the mood it gives off. Doing some still lifes of similar situations will help you work some more subtle colours into the shadow side of your pieces though, which will really help them pop.
Keep up the good work :)