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Hey man! You surely are getting better, those studies are looking gooood!
if I may give you advice, i think you would benefict a lot from mastering the subtle transitions between value tonalities, it would make your progress skyrocket i think, so I would say that doing some master studies in black and white would be a good idea :) keep it up dude!
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Great studies and really awesome to see the different subjects you choose to study! Something about the portrait I noticed, maybe try to avoid going all black on the eyelids, it usually flattens the image a bit. Maybe it's something to do with the value transitions that Renato just mentioned. Really cool stuff echo! Hope to see a lot more so keep it up! :)
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So I haven't had much time for drawing this week. But I've done some small progress with the master study. I looked up a bunch of old artists, and took out a few paintings that I liked the most. I then choose which study to start with: "Man in Oriental Costume" by Rembrandt.
This is my progress thus far.
1: I first zoomed out as much as possible to get the mayor shapes and values. But all the measurements went wrong.
2: In the second picture I have defined the mayor shapes and focused some more on form and measurements. Haven't got everything right yet, but I'm getting there. After this I will focus more on values, and the transitions between value tonalities like RenatoCaria mentioned :)
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Hey there, very nice studies overall. Really great amount of study work done here. I'm really happy to see so. I noticed that you are either following "21 Days to be a better Artist" or just the Noah Bradley method. It's very good. I never tried it but I got as far as to try to fix my proportions with other means. Keep up the good work, you seem to be doing just great! Will keep my eye on your sketchbook mate! :D
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Nice improvement on the studies! Your edge control jumped up.